From k.durkin -
Date: Thursday, 18 September 2003, 09:37:00
I checked out your site and it all worked great this time. You've got a lot of content there; tighten up on the clarity though. I know that's easier said than done, often hard to back away from our own work and see it in it's entirety but keep at it. Maybe a fusion between Star Trek and Spearhead, I don't know... like a parody or something.....like Franti doing a spoken word before the federation.